| Ven | Date: Saturday, 2011-06-25, 1:23 AM | Message # 1 |
 [Konohagakure] Shodai Hokage - Sharingan Master
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| Once all missions are complete please hyper link them here where either the S-rank or Kage (Or someone else that has been told to do it) will grade it. Your score will reflect on this.
Neatness of the Mission 10/__
Dialog 10/__
Grammar 10/__
Detail 10/__
Story Line 10/__
Effort 50/__ (Usually an automatic 50)
Total 100/__
A- 100-90
B- 89-80
C- 79-70
D- 69-60
F- 69-50
Lower then that is not accepted.
If you score anything lower then a 70 you will not receive Ryo.
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| Ven | Date: Thursday, 2011-07-07, 2:02 AM | Message # 2 |
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[Konohagakure] Shodai Hokage - Sharingan Master
Group: Administrators
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| The Run Away Monk Nagishima
Uh a few things that I think you should know that are minimal. Um, you had a few word repeats and a few choppy sentences, but I didn't count off there I was more concerned with the length which was quite short. I would have loved to see it as a quite lengthy post or two posts. But none-the-less you are done your reward is 15,000 Ryo. Grade A
Grading:
Neatness of the Mission 10/ 9
Dialog 10/9
Grammar 10/10
Detail 10/9
Story Line 10/9
Effort 50/50
Total 100/96--- A
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